the end

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by the reconstructionist (lucifer doesn't exist. he is only the planet venus personified!) on Wednesday, 02-May-2007 19:31:24

Our time is ending.
The world is closing in on us.
We are in for a big shock if we keep living the way we are.
The world is ending, maybe not literally but in other ways.
If we keep spilling blood and living excessively
we will not be able to ignore our fate.
We are slowly turning into self-destruction and war-like creatures.
Our ignorence could damage us
and it may be too late.
The costs of wars may far outway the so-called benefits, if any exist at all.
Don't let this world die.
We will survive.
If we can't change
before its too late
to end this fate.
,not sure how you could classify this as a poem but oh well.

Post 2 by Gracesong (Zone BBS is my Life) on Saturday, 05-May-2007 13:58:55

I totally agree with the message! wel, it's considered a poem because it has a steady rhythm and meter, it kind of rhymes, and it's set up in lines.
Keep posting! Look forward to reading more of your stuff!
Iris

Post 3 by the reconstructionist (lucifer doesn't exist. he is only the planet venus personified!) on Wednesday, 09-May-2007 9:03:04

Lol, it kind of rhymes
and its set up in lines.

Post 4 by the reconstructionist (lucifer doesn't exist. he is only the planet venus personified!) on Wednesday, 09-May-2007 9:05:56

I should have put something about the environment in there. Oh well.

Post 5 by lauralou (Account disabled) on Thursday, 14-Jun-2007 18:20:46

hmm, it wasnt the best thing i've ever read

Post 6 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Sunday, 15-Jul-2007 17:07:20

Your message was pretty clear, and yes, it's a poem.

Post 7 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Sunday, 10-Feb-2008 20:33:29

Stands out as an excellent. Please, this poem was one of the exceptions to good. it's excellent. So, yeah, well said. I agree. Just look around and you will see that it's very true. I mean for example, Global warming.